tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post1282524338662881871..comments2023-10-07T01:22:16.072-07:00Comments on One More Step: Emptinesspoeticallytintedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14150217775612386057noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-17426821893910430252008-07-30T06:17:00.000-07:002008-07-30T06:17:00.000-07:00Yes you are biased but you are also my most candid...Yes you are biased but you are also my most candid critic! I recall telling you this. It's funny how the ones I love are the ones you don't and the ones I am almost ashamed to publish are the ones you love. It's also funny (NOT HA HA)how everyone tends to agree with you. lol. <BR/>Goes to show I've got questionable taste in my own poetry. :)<BR/><BR/>P.S.<BR/>Big hug. For this and for what you are going thru right now.poeticallytintedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150217775612386057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-16070057136684250582008-07-30T05:33:00.000-07:002008-07-30T05:33:00.000-07:00Remember what I said when I first read this? I'll ...Remember what I said when I first read this? I'll quote (with maybe a little editing for propriety's sake).<BR/><BR/>"If you ever decide to quit your present job, you’d make a great living as a wet blanket :)<BR/><BR/> <BR/><BR/>Ahhh… see, you lied! There’s absolutely NO explanation here. One reads the thing with a mounting sense of anticipation… what in God’s name happened to this person? Why the gloom? All is despair, doom, desolation and apparently it’s going to stretch forever. All we’re given is a slight hint (3rd stanza) that the death of a loved one might be involved (from old age, or illness? it could be either). It’s shameful, callous, patently unfair treatment of the prospective reader… I LOVE IT!!!<BR/><BR/> <BR/><BR/>MORE, PLEASE."<BR/><BR/>Seriously though, like the other guys noted it's simple but could lend itself to various interpretations. I think the best thing about it is the way it effortlessly pulls you into the 'mood' (sadness, despondence, despair...)<BR/><BR/>Good stuff, girl (but hey, that don't count coming from me because we both know I'm biased).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-67923417950593513842008-07-24T06:04:00.000-07:002008-07-24T06:04:00.000-07:00Thanks for the comment. An honour from one talente...Thanks for the comment. An honour from one talented as you. Drop by every now and then.poeticallytintedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150217775612386057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-42907277604673858232008-07-23T17:40:00.000-07:002008-07-23T17:40:00.000-07:00wow! i love the simplicity of this.great write up....wow! i love the simplicity of this.<BR/><BR/>great write up.Lighty 'neferet' Kopearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04294781007590894566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-28388161320476649882008-07-23T01:46:00.000-07:002008-07-23T01:46:00.000-07:00Will surely do. Thanks. mwah. and thanks for the v...Will surely do. Thanks. mwah. and thanks for the valuable advice yesterday.poeticallytintedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14150217775612386057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7300008845881246553.post-84280237312083321092008-07-22T11:33:00.000-07:002008-07-22T11:33:00.000-07:00You have no idea how deep this is. It is so simpl...You have no idea how deep this is. It is so simple,, yet multi-faceted in its meaning.... at least to me... lest I try unsuccessfully to decipher what goes on in your strange mind.<BR/><BR/>Nicely written... Keep them coming puh-lease!T.Williams-Ahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854892435961019577noreply@blogger.com