I'LL HAVE THIS DANCE
My heart beats a tune with yours
A song whose words I never learnt
Bubbles, spills all around us
The whisper of your fingertips
Like the tentative first notes
Of a song in a mystery language
My skin leaps to meet your hands
Like the melody of string instruments
We flow, we writhe together
In this corporeal dance
Strum me, your guitar
Beat me, your drum
Blare me, your trumpet
Let this dance begin
A song whose words I never learnt
Bubbles, spills all around us
The whisper of your fingertips
Like the tentative first notes
Of a song in a mystery language
My skin leaps to meet your hands
Like the melody of string instruments
We flow, we writhe together
In this corporeal dance
Strum me, your guitar
Beat me, your drum
Blare me, your trumpet
Let this dance begin
DRESSED TO KILL
In
Your minuscule
Outfit
And
My minuscule
Heartbeat
At
Your Luminous
Beauty
I
Keel Over
Slowly
THE END (it ended, he wrote half of this, I wrote the other half)
Looking back
Words never said
Silence broken only
By the sound of hearts breaking
Driving off in a cloud of dust
I face the end before the beginning
Listless days
Tears almost shed
Music that teases and tortures
Memory, a throbbing tooth
I will no longer have you
12 more steps:
i like ur half of the poem
wairraminute, are u male or female?
beautiful poem! very lyrical and flowing, yet with a lot of energy. very nice! it's definitely drawing me to want to read it over again.
awesome poem!
have an awesome weekend!
-Steve @ fluxlife
i love dressed to kill
hot
i'm snapping
Just beautiful.
The words actually look like an instrument so reinforced the feeling of love as music.
Loved it!
Deep - deep - infinitely deep - great stuff girl!
WAOH NICE PEOM
Who is he? lovely peom my-lady.
Whatever happened to the reply to my text?
i always love your poetry
girl you sure have talent
nice poem. "throbbing tooth", I liked that one.
Hope all is well.
i should claim these socks,,,right?
for minutes you had me leaning towards my laptop.this is good.How are you?
@bumight: how do you know which one is my half of the poem, are you clairvoyant? lol. newayz (in a ghostly voice)I am what I am... I am having fun messing with you right now...
@Steve: Hey thanks. Glad you liked.
@Kafo: lol. You know when you are in the mood for a 'freakum' dress nothing can stop you!
@ MS Sula: thanks babes for dropping by. Poetry is life, life is expressed through music there is and will always be a profound connection between the two.
@ Enigma: thanks bro
@ Tolla: it's your first time yeah? Welcome and thanks for stopping by. will drop by at yours shortly
@Standtall: i will call you oh. no worries. didn't have a weekend was at an office retreat. Who is he? THAT'S like a HUGE secret! but it was aeons ago though
@MDM: I am printing out your comment and i am so framing it and putting it up on my wall! lol. THANKS
@Solomonsydelle: That's the best phrase in the whole poem for me too. you've got discerning eyes.
@Robyn: The baton is now yours, oya, over to you. Glad you liked. High praise, from one talented as you!
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