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Thursday, May 28, 2009

Checkmate!

Mate

Wait
The game is up
So you can stop
Did you think that I was blind?
Did you think I wouldn’t mind?

Mate
Hate
Is what I feel
So here’s the deal
'Won’t play with you for one more day
My mind is made up, come what may!

23 more steps:

blogoratti said...

Checkmate..game over uhn.
Nice!

Danny Bagucci said...

Naice!!!!!! Loved the brevity!

leggy said...

i love the name:checkmate...first tym here

Woomie O! said...

on point.

Kafo said...

short and to the point

Tairebabs said...

I am trying to figure out the post. Is someone is breaking up with someone? I love chess by the way. Sadly my computer always beats me silly.

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

uh oh! check mate indeed oh!

How far? Just read your last post re; the hit and run. wow.

StandTall-The Activist said...

So, is ryhm allowed in poem? Nice,very nice. Checkmate!

deola said...

poeticious!

Robyn said...

Wifey
i love this
I have a poem with the same title.
miss you-
where are you?

Tisha said...

i love ur poem

ManCee said...

gameover

Hmmm
but really, checkmate?
it could well be a stalemate, a draw, or one of the players just knocks his king piece over in submission...

nice poem though. I like it.
THOU WRITEST WELL
lol
:-)

Stanis said...

lol! serious yarn here, but written with some mirth, i like it!

Buttercup said...

Ohhh, I totally LOVED this! :)

Freddie said...

"Nonsensical" huh???... Pretty much makes sense to me! Love the flow and concept.

Afronuts said...

Sounds like a british inspired poem.

Was this inspired by true life events?

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SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

Babe, hope all is well

StandTall-The Activist said...

Pls update o. Check my blog for an award received by u.

Temite said...

erhmmmm, What happened. Seriously your rhymes are off DA hook!

seye said...

NICE ONE NICE ONE! Me like

akaBagucci said...

hmmm... was this a disguised attempt at a swan song?

Olufunke said...

Nice one!
The rhymes nice one.
I am trying to understand...
How are you doing?

 
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