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Saturday, November 1, 2008

'B' on my mind

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Darkness
Mocking laughter
Shadows of malevolence
Creeping around

Mocking laughter
As the sands run out
Gone all gone
Pain abounds

Shadows of malevolence
Brush past me
Time stops
No second rounds

Creeping around
Gotta fight death
But first, gotta grieve
Someone I love just went in the ground

p.s.
it happened in May '08, but it still hurts like mad!

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BrownSugar said...

((((((((huge hugs))))))))
God rest her soul. Be easy.

Shubby Doo said...

i'm sorry for your loss... remember that although death may leave a heartache that is hard to heal, love leaves a memory that no one can steal.

hugs

Naapali said...

Pele. Loss changes us.

Jaycee said...

*Sigh*...

How it hurts when someone we love passes away...

FFF said...

eh ya. pele, love. God is ur strength. He alone can truly comfort u.

NigerianDramaQueen said...

So sorry about your loss. Grieve as long as you need to. It is necessary.

Funms said...

Its hard to lose someone you love...... just remember how happy he/she will want you to be...... it is well hun.... nice poem

OluwaDee said...

Sorry 4 your loss.

Be strong.

LG said...

hmmm'
May her soul continue to rest in peace Amen

TWayne said...

I know exactly how you feel. Bee, Tenades, 2 people we loved and lost. So young, so talented, breaths of fresh air! I think about them everyday... sometimes almost shedding a tear or 2.

But where there's life, there's hope and I'm glad that I got to know them.

So right now, their memory lives on... in me... (and you obviously)...

RIP B. RIP Tenades!

Robyn said...

been there,,really soorry,from poet to poet,,i love yo flow.Drop by some time.ill make a follow up on you.

poeticallytinted said...

Thanks everyone.

Robyn I love your blog!

Kafo said...

hmmmm
only God can wipe away ur tears

 
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